Fictionalized Fiction

September 7, 2008

The Therapist

Filed under: Fiction,Uncategorized — John @ 3:15 pm

***This extremely short piece of flash fiction is going to be getting a full work over and rewrite into something a bit longer at a later time, just had to throw it up and get it out of my head***

George had always been the life of the party. Living Life George, they always called him. For he had always seemed full of life, full of life and food. All throughout high school and college he had been the happy go lucky fat guy that poked as much fun at his size as anyone. Self Deprecating they called it. The counselors had all seen it, and tried to warn him, tried to help him. But George wouldn’t listen. He knew they didn’t understand, they thought he was trying to fit in, but he was just being himself. All the food, the alcohol, and eventually the drugs were just a part of him. This is what he always told the counselors, the therapists, the doctors. Even after several trips to and from state mandated rehab.

“It’s just me being me.” George said, as this latest therapist asked him why he had been using that night.

The therapist looked onward, as if waiting for some other response.

“I’m not a bad person, I just enjoy living life as best as I can.” George snorted.

“And what about the little girl? The one you ran over? Didn’t she deserve the chance to live life as best as she could?” The therapist asked showing no sign emotion.

“Hey I’m as shook up about that as you are Doc, but I mean come on, where were her parents? I mean what kind of mother lets their kids play out side unsupervised?”

“Perhaps the kind that is too busy dealing with people like you.”

George didn’t see the therapist crying, didn’t see the picture of the little girl he had ran over sitting on her desk, didn’t see the brass letter opener in her hand. George didn’t see any of this. Perhaps if he had, he would have been able to live life fully at least one more day.

February 27, 2008

Inconvenient History

Filed under: Another View,Fiction,History,Racisim,Slavery,Uncategorized — John @ 11:16 pm

Toby used a mug to rinse his head with water from the trough, same as every day since he had been brought to this place. The cool water on his head helped him forget the days labor in the cotton field. His hands covered in calluses and blisters from the spiked plants he worked with. Stepping into the house, house…more like a rickety shack, he made his way to his bunk and laid down for a moment to try and cool down. He could feel his skin still burning from the late summer heat. It felt tight, dry, and hot. He swore one of these days the skin on his back was going to burst into flames under the hot Georgia sun. The other indentured servants, that’s what the masters called them all, filtered into the bunk house each looking exhausted and bruised from the day’s work. Many wearing a look of defeat as their heads and brows hung low in shame. Toby knew some of these people from the village he had grown up in, they were all so happy there. Life was fulfilling, and despite their hardships they stayed in high spirits. But here, in this place, under their masters whips it seemed they lost that spirit. Perhaps it had been beaten out of them by the whips, or burned out of them by the sun, or bled out of them by the cotton plant. How Toby hated handling those damned thorny plants daily.

As the sun began to set the women had cooked supper for all. Toby was surprised to see meat served with supper tonight. “The masters must have been feeling generous today”, he thought to himself. Then as Toby took a big bite the sour taste filled his mouth and he could not keep the rancid food in his mouth any longer and spat it out onto the ground. “Of course. Why would they give us any meat they would eat themselves,” he thought. What Toby didn’t realize was one of the field bosses standing behind him as he spat out the rancid food. “What’s wrong boy? You not appreciate the meat Mister Jefferson gave you to eat?” the field boss asked, eying Toby with a steely gaze, whip held tightly in his hand.

“No Boss, its just that its gone bad Boss”
“Gone bad? I don’t see any of the other animals here complaining.” He said waving his coiled whip around towards the other slaves.
“I guess your just too good for Mister Jefferson’s gracious givings”
“No Boss, I meant no disrespect. My stomach just ain’t quite right today. I”ll eat it happily, Boss. I swear.” Toby said meekly.
“Oh, No. I wouldn’t want your delicate stomach to get hurt.”

The field boss grabbed Toby’s bowl from him and shoved him into the ground with the heel of his boot as he dumped the contents of the bowl onto the ground. He kicked dirt over the food and spat atop the mound as he turned to walk away. Toby pushed himself back up to a sitting position and stared at the field boss walking away with the whip clenched firmly in his ebony hand. Some days Toby had wished he wasn’t seen as a lesser person, he wished he wasn’t born white.

February 19, 2008

Malik

Filed under: Fantasy,Fiction,Uncategorized — John @ 12:49 am

The night was still. Not even crickets could be heard over the silence. How many nights like this had the shadowy figured watched over? Ha had long last count. This is Malik, a night watchman over the small quiet forest village of Dugar. Atop his precarious post, a small stage barely the size of a child’s bed, he knelt silently and still watching and listening for any signs of possible attack. Despite the fact that Dugar was in essence a simple insignificant town, barely a community, they kept a constant watch, especially in these dangerous and troubled times. With the hood of his cloak covering his head and the bottom fanning our around him not even the most perceptive of creatures could have detected him kneeling there in his mist gray cloak. This was the way Malik enjoyed it, him alone against the wilderness keeping his senses on the edge between alertness and instinctual reaction.

A slight creak in the platform behind him told that his relief had arrived. A large burly man, clearly head and shoulders of the five and a half feet of Malik and out weighing him easily by fifty pounds, placed his hand on Malik’s right shoulder, the signal of relief for the silent watchmen. malik smiled as he stood and turned to face as good of a friends as he had ever known, although nearly a stranger, Baniff. With a simple nod Malik descended the single corded and frayed rope that was used to ascend the tower. The light haze of the on coming sun was beginning to tough the void night sky as Malik walked with measured steps towards his house, and his warm bed. Despite the gear that he wore as he walked, and his great strides nearly as long as he was tall, he made no noise that even a dog’s keen ears would be able to discern. Along the dusty paths and rooted passage between the many mounds and buildings the watchman silently strolled. He wished to make it to bed before the town had fully awoken. He could already hear people bustling about within their homes and could smell the sweet scent of freshly baked bread. he often cursed himself for talking such a long way home in the mornings, but he so loved that fresh scent that he couldn’t force himself to take a more direct path.

Malik stopped by a single crevice, which had formed from the base of a tree, that had several milky flowers growing along it’s side. He reached down with one hand and felt for the hairy bristled roots of the tree until he found a small piece barely an inch in girth and broke off a hand sized length, with a slight snap it came free. Malik continued to walk along his way cleaning the soil from the root with his cloak. This had been his final meal before he rested every morning since he had become one of the night watchmen over Dugar. The others claimed the root to have a soothing effect on the body and soul allowing whomever to eat it to sleep easily despite the time or circumstance, and as far as Malik could discern the tales were true for he had never had trouble sleeping for six or more hours after eating a small bit from the root. But it also seemed to relieve strained muscles and encourage the scrapes and cuts that he had received during the night upon his perch to heal by the time he woke.

After nearly half an hour Malik finally reached his home, a small subterranean room hollowed out of a grassy knoll with a small wooden door covered with soil and grass and attached a stone used as the only grip. Malik slipped in as quietly as he walked.
Bending low through the door and slipping his dusty heavy cloak over the back of his sole chair he made his way to the corner table where his gear waited for him each day as he slept. he removed the mithril chain vest, a wonderfully crafted vest of a metal as strong as steel yet light as leather his only true piece of armor, and laid it carefully upon the table. Beside the vest he laid his belt holding the mystical pouch that a once powerful wizard, whose name has long been forgotten, had give him when he was just a child. The small hand axe, customary weapon of all watchmen in Dugar, he rested on the truly marvelous vest along with his new hickory short bow and quiver. Above the table, in the wall, sat two hooks covered in cloth; here Malik kept his most prized possession. A weapon of truly powerful origins, a mystical long sword, so light and perfectly balanced it seemed to Malik that he had often thought it to have been purposefully forged for his hand. The handle made of pure ivory and carved intricately into the shape of a tiger’s head as the pummel and claw at the hilt joined to a perfectly smooth undamaged blade, which shone with a light purple haze, despite the many battles he had fought with this very blade in his hand. Malik reverently placed his enchanted sword is the hooks and took a moment to bask in it’s soothing glow.

Word Count – 891

February 6, 2008

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